One Word
One word spoken, beloved’s sigh
One word spoken, birth cries
One word spoken, life began
One word spoken, at the end
The word is….
© Ceol
One word spoken, beloved’s sigh
One word spoken, birth cries
One word spoken, life began
One word spoken, at the end
The word is….
© Ceol
February 21st, 2010 at 8:35 am
‘One Word’ is another of your short poems that has much depth and that calming mystic quality…your first four lines are of a pleasing spiritual tone…your fifth line uncompleted and separated from the main body of the poem leaves the reader to their own imagination…I like this writing and I like what you did with the fifth line.
You are a fine poet, Ceol…’One Word’ is indeed a poem…so much said in so few words.
Coastpoet