I Dream
I dream of when
My soul was free
But now it is trapped
Behind a wall of fear
Imprisoned in a deepest pit
It cannot be freed
My dreams are ashes
My soul will never
Fly free
© Ceol
I dream of when
My soul was free
But now it is trapped
Behind a wall of fear
Imprisoned in a deepest pit
It cannot be freed
My dreams are ashes
My soul will never
Fly free
© Ceol
October 30th, 2009 at 12:49 am
Your poetry is very inspiring but it is also honest and pure. This poem (I Dream) is sad I think and reflects an emotion that is very real but it is sad and if this is about your dreams and about you…well I hope it is a passing feeling because I know that dreams can change and they are not always reflecting what is real but perhaps a significant meaning to a moment in time.
November 10th, 2009 at 8:35 am
Ceol…’I Dream’ is a poem that is true and emotional to me…it is like my own voice when I dreamed that my own soul would be free…through your poetry I am learning what being free is…thank you my dear friend.
Coastpoet